Editing Stranded in fantasy (section)

==Journal Entry 225==

So I ran into the master artificer.  He's mastered his bicycle design and they're all over the city for those who can afford them.  He fixed the traction issue but it's still awkward with the forward peddles and a harsh friction break.  Then there's the issue of people having to learn to ride one.  Lots of crashes.  Bicycle safety gear was invented shortly after by an enterprising merchant.  It's more or less leather padding.  Anyways, we had a talk about some things.  I have been promised payment for my part in this.  Once that happens, I'll introduce him to Austin and see what those two can do together.  Avery headed off to the sun church, but came back flustered.  She went in with all of her righteousness and apparently got laughed out of the building.  Better then getting stabbed I guess.  Marcus returned.  Apparently his girlfriend is crazier or craftier than he thought.  They went back to her place and had a nice long comforting talk and then she gave him a ring as proof of her love and devotion.  It was a magic ring and he can't take it off.  She knows where he is at all times now.  The best part is that she bribed the University mages to not interfere and remove it.  I wonder what weddings here are like?