Editing Stranded in fantasy (section)

==Journal Entry 186==

Well, the ride took longer then expected, but Welcome to Eridale.  One of the minor port cities and a hub on the trade circuit.  The city is of stone buildings and tight claustrophobic alleyways.  According to local sources, this town was built with small streets to make it easier to block them off should the population revolt.  The area used to be under control of an asshole Duke.  The population revolted anyways and the Duke couldn't escape because they blocked off the small streets.  They're all long gone and the city is borderline anarchy.  The only thing keeping the peace is merchant guild paid guards.  I would say that the guild runs the town, but they don't actually have an office here.  So it's a guard run town.  There are some really strange and specific laws and harsh punishments.  To make matters worse, there are four guard captains and they're all psions, all mind-linked at all times and operate as one being with four bodies, and continually check in on their subordinates.  Jason says there isn't even a thieves guild present.  We're being careful here and have set up in an inn.  We'll leave in a day, Marcus wanted to check out the Bards college that's supposedly here.  Why do they have a Bard's college, here of all places?